The Car Trade-In English Essay
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The thesis of this reading revolves around the discomfort of car trade-ins, where giving up an old car that has served an individual well over the years for a used-new car is not a good idea. There are many comma splices, sentence fragments, and run-ons, which affect the smooth flow of the reading, making it not enjoyable and even difficult to understand.