The writer discusses the various problems experienced by customers served by the railway transport provider. The essay then suggests various solutions to these problems as obtained from varied sources. This text…
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The writer introduces the topic by giving the details on Sydney Central Station. This introduction gives information on its location, the people it serves and its purpose. The same paragraph also introduces the major discussion in the text. The writer then discusses the topic in the subsequent paragraphs before making a conclusion in the last paragraph to recap the content of the body. There is a positive attempt in sentence structure and development of paragraphs. The sentences contain a noun and verb such as in “As a public sector, Sydney central station is the largest railway station in Australia.” The paragraphs have an introductory sentence and the subsequent sentences support the idea before the concluding sentence recaps them as indicated in the fifth paragraph.
Right from the introductory paragraph, the writer exhibits proper coordination through appropriate use of conjunctions such as although, indeed, generally and therefore. For example, “Although Sydney central station is...” and “Therefore, in order to give some useful advises…” used to introduce a contradictory sentence and to express an eventuality respectively. There is good use of noun phrases such as “poor facilities” and “long queues”. Both simple and complex sentences have been correctly used. Examples include “Therefore, all the series of problems are to be solved” and “Typically, the Sydney central railway station is responsible for satisfying all customers and improving the high level of service” respectively. The writer uses active voice to show authority in expressing own opinion. This is seen in “In my opinion, it is…” This is critically used in the conclusion paragraph to stamp authority in the essay.
On the other hand, the writer portrays some weaknesses in the essay. There is inappropriate use of conjunctions such as above all in “above all, the most obvious symbol of the station’s problem…” The writer sought
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