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It is only but natural that every person will pass away one time or another and when he does, he carries with him not his money he acquired during his lifetime but the feelings of other people whom he had met, influenced and affected. He will be remembered not because he had a Ferrari or a mansion in an exclusive subdivision but will be cherished by the way he offered a person to ride with him in his Ferrari during a strong downpour or the way he used his mansion as a haven for indigent children.
What we have done during our lifetime matters more than what we have acquired``. For me, the second passage is better and more dramatic than the first one. In this regard, I realized that I have become more polished in my thoughts and more creative in thinking of writing the things I want others to hear me say. Before, I was struggling on what to say next. Now, I find it relatively easy to find the right words. It would seem that I have a whole plan already in my head which just needed to be written down.
I have also begun to appreciate how important it is to have a good knowledge of rules in grammar and spelling. It is not enough that I keep relying on Microsoft Word to check my essays for grammar and spelling errors. I should be able to detect this by myself because there are papers which need to be written in class especially during examinations and certain cases which are not detected by the Word Spell and Grammar Check function. For example, the sentence I typed as `I firmly as believe.. an exclusive subdivision but will be cherished by the way he offered a person to ride with him in his Ferrari during a strong downpour or the way he used his mansion as a haven for indigent children.
What we have done during our lifetime matters more than what we have acquired. For me, the second passage is better and more dramatic than the first one. In this regard, I realized that I have become more polished in my thoughts and more creative in thinking of writing the things I want others to hear me say. Before, I was struggling on what to say next. Now, I find it relatively easy to find the right words. It would seem that I have a whole plan already in my head which just needed to be written down.
I have also begun to appreciate how important it is to have a good knowledge of rules in grammar and spelling. It is not enough that I keep relying on Microsoft Word to check my essays for grammar and spelling errors. I should be able to detect this by myself because there are papers which need to be written in class especially during examinations and certain cases which are not detected by the Word Spell and Grammar Check function. For example, the sentence I typed as I firmly as believe that what I have read happened in real life is certainly wrong because of the word as which should not have been there but this is not recognized as an error.
I also noticed that there are repetitive mistakes which I committed. For example, I always use the word he even though I am pertaining to a lady or to everybody and that I am prone to start a paragraph using the word The. In fact, my first essay was written that way but I have luckily recognized this and made corrections. There are still cases of three to four consecutive paragraphs starting with that word but I revise them after
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