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Of course, my composition needs to be reviewed. I am looking forward to this process this is the time for me to look into areas that I need to improve on. The process of peer review is important because it is hard to critique my own composition as there are areas that I am not able to see by myself. And as a learner, I will be biased for my own writing and I do not have much learning curve to really say whether a composition. I have to learn from the opinion of others. I am glad that there is a peer review because it enabled me to see certain angles in my writing from a reader point of view that be difficult to see on my own.
Through it, I realize that I really need to do more writing to practice my writing skills.When I write, I usually do not realize that there is a lapse in the flow of my thought. Say for example about the school essay that I previously mentioned as an example; I immediately jumped from talking about the necessity of going to school to talking about my friends without providing a smooth transition. Such that I have to rewrite it after reading it as I found the flow of my thought to be rather awkward.
Reading the second draft, it read better than the initial draft because I was able to provide a smoother transition. Revising it made me realize that compositions need to be re-read to find its awkwardness and flaws and corrected them in the second draft. And by re-reading and revising it, I was able to see the strong and weak. .
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