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Rewriting examples for grammar comments...?I am trying to make a list of canned feedback comments. I need help coming up with new examples; you are going to see some of the examples repeated many times. For instance, see the first one: Thanks for the excellent work on your assignment; you did a great job of writing and meeting the objectives. Just a couple of pointers here: The assignment jumps around here. Make sure you use solid and smooth transitions. Instead of writing transitions that could connect any paragraph to any other paragraph, write a transition that could only connect one specific paragraph to another specific paragraph. Example: Overall, Management Systems International has logged increased sales in every sector, leading to a significant rise in...
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Thesis comments...facility in China--so part of the value chain is located in a different county. This part “either backwards in order to obtain raw materials or other intermediate products needed by its main operations, or forwards to provide a distribution channel for its exports” refers directly to the value chain-going upstream or downstream. 4. explained in the last point; the third option, diversification, would be if the company creates a completely new product, with its own unique value chain, in a foreign country. 5. You added this last reference to Saudi Arabia; it was not in the original that I sent you. So I don’t know why you added it (?) ; I don’t think it ‘s a big deal whether it is in or not, but I would lean towards...
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Comments...is possible but could prove to be very difficult. In order to conduct casual research properly, an experiment(s) whereby independent variables are manipulated needs to be possible. Perhaps this is possible as a structured undisguised contrived observation by which the decision to purchase a coffee is measured against the flavour of coffee available. If so, the flavours that promoted the greatest purchase rate should be introduced. However, determining any causal relationship between coffee flavour and a coffee purchase decision is likely to be difficult. Particularly since Malhotra (2010) notes that not even the price sales relationship is universal. Comments: It may be difficult, but not impossible. The...
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Response to Comments...in the 1960’s the money these people had was worth twice as much as today’s money because our elders had greater buying power due to the fact money had not depreciated like it has in today’ economy. DQ2 When a company is using the NVP value method a firm should only accept a project if the project has a NPV above cero. In your response I believe you mentioned that a company could do badly irrelevant of the NPV being above cero. Well this could happen because the NPV analysis is limited to the project that the analysis is evaluating. If a firm has financial troubles that existed irrelevant of the results associated with the NPV of a project then a firm could go down under. The NPV analysis is not a tool that can be used...
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Cigarette taxes comments...The paper suggests that the huge losses in revenue are because a large portion of smokers avoid paying tax. While this might be true, I don’t think we can really blame the people from avoiding taxes.
First of all, there is a difference between tax evasion and tax avoidance. Tax evasion is illegal and must be punished. On the other hand, tax avoidance is legal and is but a natural tendency for all. For one is always inclined to choose to pay less tax.
When we say one evades tax, this means he does not pay the tax that he is legally required to pay. For example, a person purchases ten boxes of cigarettes in New York City. He is assessed, for example, 10 cents as tax for each box. Since he purchased ten boxes, he is...
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DQ1 Comments NM and DQ Comments ST...DQ1) I like your opinion and the fact that you work in the industry, but I differ to your answer in regards to giving away the drug to people cannot afford to buy it. This practice would be discriminatory against other patients that are poor, but are using their money to purchase a better medical that covers their cost. The government is responsible for finding a way to pay for the expenses of those uninsured people. Public companies are in the business to make money, not to become a socialist regime. In the United States of America there are over 50 million uninsured people. The federal government should create a universal health plan that provided service to all 310 million Americans. A non-profit organization should target... I like your...
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Comments...Essay Thanksgiving The thesis of this text is that children constitute a different culture than adults, and are treated as subordinate by having to sit at a separate table during thanksgiving, and other important meals. The essay is divided into paragraphs which begin with an introduction of why adults think a kid’s table is necessary – things like messiness, children’s talk and so on, then ends with an explanation as to why this is not a good enough reason to support dividing the group in that way. This organization as effective because it refuted each point as the essay progressed without having to constantly backtrack to places much earlier in the essay. All points were on target as to the thesis, but a bit more explanation...
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Response to Peer Comments...Transactions Transactions Response to Characteristics that Make Transactions Possible The two characteristics you have d resonate well with most people’s views on the characteristics of a transaction. Therefore, I agree with you that one characteristic - and perhaps the most basic - of a transaction is a situation whereby two or more people come together to manage or conduct business, which is the most important characteristic in my opinion since it is the foundation of a transaction. I also agree with you that a trading agreement is another characteristic that makes transactions possible. However to add to your argument, a trading agreement forms a basis on how the parties in the transaction will engage, which underlines its... Transactions...
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Writing comments... 10 April 14 The Cross-Cultural Global Economy It is important to that when it comes to the economy, it is not all about working in one’s own country any longer. Instead, no matter how business works, it all has to do with working cross-culturally and dealing with people who may have different ethics than those of Americans. There are different laws and ways of doing business when it comes to working together globally in the business world. There are many aspects that must be considered when working with those in other countries. Though there are certain customs that businesspeople are used to in America, it is necessary to utilize cultural sensitivity in order to ensure that work goes smoothly. It is important... 10 April 14 The...
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Give comments to personal statements...Comments on Personal ment Kathryn’s choice for medicine begins with experience of the sarcoma kid whose positivity and encourages her to pursue medicine, a dream she continues high school by focusing on sports medicine. The Panama journey tests her skills on communication under culture differences, and the success prompts her to major Physiology. Through internship, she learns to develop and improve time management skills (Daft, & Marcic, 2013). The passion for medicine and individual care is the basis for her career as a Physician Assistant.
Collin’s fascination by how things work is the foundation of his career path. The fascination is the basis of his personal and career goals to major in Software Engineering. He...
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