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The abstract of the paper is suddenly jumping into conclusions. The abstract according to me is the part which reflects the ideology that has been used in the paper, the ideology that is being discussed in the paper. The abstract in this case does not reflect what the paper will discuss or what is the idea on which the paper or the author intends to emphasize. As we go further the introduction is given and that also has the same thing that I have noticed previously and that is the introduction of the main i9delogies that are being used by the authors.
The introduction if, having the introductions or the definitions of the main technical words that have been used in this case than that would make the article a bit easier to read and comprehend in this case. In this way, the restrictions are pulled out. In addition, this will help a greater number of readers to understand the terms that are being dealt with in the article. The rest of the article has been made difficult to read and understand as t eh flow of the article is not in a very good manner.
It needs a better flow of interlinking concepts. Also the language that has been used is very technical and that needs a change as well. The way the research has been conducted has to be seen yet again. The articles especially the scholarly articles are not only for the people who belong to that particular field. Therefore it has to be made kept in mind that the articles are for open and free reading by the people from different fields so the article including the abstract especially should be written in the proper manner and the easy language.
The paper as I have noticed is very specific and the topic has been discussed within the limits of the ideologies. The flow of the knowledge thought in the very technical manner is very good and the conclusions can bee seen to be drawn during the article. The discussions that have been made in the article are kept to the point and a large list of the scholar let references have been given so that the better laid theories in relation to the topic can be given. And this, in addition, gives a wider scope to the topic and the article while keeping within the range of the topic.
There has been continuous usage of the phrase that there is a difference in the individualism and the collectivism and the difference has been placed because of the cultural variations. This is the phrase that has been noticed in the abstract and the introduction as well. I think that this is the phrase that reflects the whole ideology of the article and this is the phrase that needs some more explanation in this sense. The question that specifically arises here is that why only the cultural variations along the different cultures place an effect on the individualism and the collectivism.
Are there any other factors that place there affects in these two ideas (Brewer 2007). In the second article that I have read is the one that discusses the ideology of the minimalism and the related ideas in the psychological world. This article has a sudden sue of the technical language as compared to the previous article. I think that the previously article though not written in the perfect manner, is written in a better manner. This
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