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Anna Huff’s article, Resistance Research Essay, talks about the oppression that Fidel Castrol and his regime imposed on the people of Cuba.
The grammar errors were minimal in this paper. The only mistake I came across was punctuation issues, which can be corrected through proofreading.
Keegan Farrell
Question 1
Keegan Farrell’s essay, Draft Zahra’s Paradise and Human Rights Abuses, discusses the current situation in Iran of how the regime is oppression its citizens. The article also discusses how the Iranians are opposing this rule, as well as how they are using human rights commissions to fight this rule.
Question 2
Every paragraph of Farrell’s essay discusses the issue mentioned above. He clearly explores the significance of oppression and resistance by explaining the effects of the resistance.
Question 3
As a way of giving textual evidence, the writer gives specific names and years, which concern the oppression and resistance in Iran.
Question 4
The logic behind this organization is that the government considers itself superior to others, and what it does is final.
Question 5
Punctuation was also the main grammar mistake in this paper. The student is not conversant with classifying positives in between their sentences. These can be rectified by proofreading the paper severely.
Maria Larios
Question 1
Maria Larios’s essay, on the other hand, discusses violence against women in today’s society. Maria discusses this issue in-depth and how it has affected the women of today.
Question 2
Every paragraph gives deep information regarding this matter as well as how the women try to resist this reality.
Question 3
Maria mentions people such as Eve Ensler who have endured the act of mistreatment as a way of giving textual evidence. Maria studies Eve deeply, which makes a reader understand what is going in Eve’s life.
Question 4
The logic behind mistreating the female race is that females were intended to be subjects of males. Women, according to men, are "useless".
Question 5
The grammar issues that I found in this paper include punctuation and incorrect use of prepositions. Such mistakes could be rectified also by proofreading the paper before handing it to the instructor.
Mike Strickland
Question 1
Mike Strickland's essay, Zahra’s Paradise and the Nonviolent Resistance Movement in Iran, talks about the oppression and resistance of Iranians being persuaded by their regime.
Question 2
Every paragraph of Strickland’s essay discusses the issue mentioned above. He explores the significance of oppression and resistance by explaining the effects of the resistance.
Question 3
As a way of giving textual evidence, the writer gives specific parties, which concern the oppression and resistance in Iran.
Question 4
The logic behind this organization is that the government considers itself superior to others, and what it does is final.
Question 5
Punctuation was also the main grammar mistake in this paper. The writer does not punctuate positives in between their sentences. These can be rectified by proofreading the paper severely.
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