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The fact that beer was accidentally formed was also a shock to me. The amount of beer consumed in the world today is of a huge quantity and I expected it to be much lower. In the United Kingdom still, a large amount of beer is consumed as primarily this state was one of the states which gained major profits through barley. According to me barley was a common crop and could not provide huge profits to a specified state. The beer consumed all over the world shows the importance of the crop which was previously unknown to me.
Furthermore, the fact that Egyptians even used beer for medicinal purposes was also a shock as modern science concludes that beer can be harmful to healthy activities. The accidental formation of beer was unexpected as it was expected that beer came into existence after a long study, however, beer was formed in the quest of storing grain. Barley and Malt have played an important role in the economics of the United Kingdom and beer is an important product used throughout the world. It can also be known that beer has decreased the rate of hard alcohol consumers throughout the world.
The immense consumption of beer throughout the world is known by reading the essay. Furthermore, the advent of beer can also be known by reading the essay. The use of beers was firstly limited but after a certain span of time, it expanded throughout the world. It has been a product which is used at celebrations also. If beer did not exist in the world the whole social environment of this world would be changed. What one thing does a reader know The reader knows that beer is used for celebratory purposes throughout the world and it is an important product of this world.
What is the most important detail, quote, or fact idea in the draftThe draft tells about the advent of malt and how the beer came into existence. It tells how the use of beer expanded from a small region throughout the world and how it is valued in the world today. Furthermore, it tells through this quote that it was also used for medicinal purposes in the lower classes "It [beer] constituted a considerable portion of the medieval diet, particularly in the lower classes" (Geary, 1983: 181). It tells about the consumption of beer as analyzed by Franklin in England.
What do you itch to explore through revisionThe revision would further detail about the history of beer. It would tell how the whole world came to know about the product. It would gather the facts as to what the total consumption of beer is in the world today and how it matters to society. The disadvantages of beer would also be analyzed in the final draft so it can possibly tell the readers how it is affecting society in a negative way. It would further conclude if beer is changing the environment of this world in the right or the wrong path.
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