However, after careful analysis of the material I managed to identify the mistakes that I had done in the Memo. Moreover, I was able to detect more errors in my previous paper that were pointed out by…
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The errors include the following issues in the below paragraphs.
Persuasiveness in my presentation was not up to the point. That is; I was not able to argue out my presentation to bring out clear meaning. Moreover, my sentences were not correctly connected to thus making it hard for the reader to find the intended meaning of the memo. However, through the remarks from my supervisor, I have managed to correct the errors and ensure that my work quickly brings out the meaning.
Language is another section that brought some mistakes to my previous work. In the last document, I employed vague pronouns thus distorting my primary objective in the document. Moreover, I did not use adequate examples to bring out my points clear. However, with the remarks from my supervisor, I was able to identify the mistake and corrected it immediately. Finally, paragraph segmentation is another section that I made it wrong. In this case, I did not make my paragraphs more objective. However, I have managed to identify the mistake done in the previous work, and I have done the corrections. Therefore, the correction of my work is in the page below.
Florida International University offers the course and its classes run from May 11, 2015 to June 19, 2015. The total cost of the course is $607.13 which is apportioned as follows, online fee $199 and tuition fee $408.13. However, I am well prepared to meet the online price.
As an assessment manager, the course will be of much help. That is; by the end of the course, I will have my communication skills. At the managerial position, I will be exposed to more sections that will enhance my communication skills. The skills gained in this post will enable me to write effectively business correspondence such as; Internet memos, emails, and reports. In this section, I will be in a position to go through various written memos and interact with different people thus boosting my
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The aim of this paper is to discuss why tobacco companies should reimburse the government for health care expenses related to tobacco use. Accountability Tobacco companies have, over the years, created an uncontrollable desire to use tobacco products such as cigarettes.
Zwick was hospitalized for mild stroke for 5 days she also qualifies for SNF (Skilled Nursing Facility). Part A is activated when the doctor has ordered the inpatient treatment of an illness and it can only be treated in hospital. Mrs. Zwick is eligible for the SNF since she needed daily skilled care and had developed a hospital related medical condition.
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