Development of career passport, the way of knowing and volunteering
Majority of the errors were related to punctuation, grammar, and incorrect MLA format. The first error was incorrect writing format in MLA style. I did not put any header in the start of the essay, which is the basic requirement of MLA style. Moreover, I did not write any title for the essay before beginning to write the essay. There were also some other mistakes like no double spacing, incorrect placement of words, and punctuation errors. Before starting to correct the mistakes present in the essay, I wrote down every single error with its line number on a separate sheet. After that, I wrote the comments of the mentor about all errors in front of the errors. Now, this was the time for me to start correcting the mistakes. Therefore, I started to correct the mistakes by including the MLA style header on the top left corner of the essay before writing anything on the paper.
Starting to correct the errors, I applied the same procedure for writing down the errors. After being done with noting the errors, I corrected the improper use of words, added a few more lines to the introduction, and added a good conclusion for the essay.
These were three of the essays, which I selected for improvement. One thing, which I must mention here, is that I really improved my style of writing by improving the essays according to the instructions of my mentor.