Revise essay draft__compare and contrast
... Be or Not To Be Stupid? Every day hundreds of thousands, if not millions, of people, of all ages, races, and genders get up out of bed and immediately check their voicemails, text messages, emails, Instagram, MySpace, Facebook, and Twitter, even before they completely open their eyes wide, or have a cup of coffee.
Thesis We are all very dependent upon our technology and we invest in it, even when we are in social settings.
We have all seen a room full of people not speaking to each other, but every single one completely focused on the phone, iPad, or computer. There are many different opinions that have been expressed concerning the modern convenience of electronic technology and way it is affecti...