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It is a very good option for anyone interested to buy a place to make it their home. Another issue that should be kept in mind while buying the house is that positioning of the rooms and the house is done as per the Chinese feng shui to bring luck to the people staying in this place.
Moreover, it is place in an open area with a wonderful view of the city so everything can enjoy a picturesque stay at this place. Hello uncle, how have you been? Is everything good at home? The reason I am writing to you is because of the simple issue that I miss my home these days. Earlier, I remember how desperate I was to move out of my place and get a job and have a place of my own. Now, having accomplished that I do not feel that I am complete even though I have everything a person can wish for.
My house is still not my home. When I was a child, I was always excited to come back to my home and stay with my close ones. The warm atmosphere of the place gave me a sense of protection and a feeling that nothing can happen to me now since I am staying in my home. Someone or the other will always be there to protect me. That sense of protection and joy is missing these days uncle. Wish I could leave everything right now and come visit you and my home. Please take care and let me know how everything is going with you.
I will come to visit you soon. The above two paragraphs, them is different in their own way. The first paragraph is giving us a sense that I am promoting my home so that other people get interested and purchase it to stay. There is no sense of my feeling or emotions attached to the place. I have not even described the place as my home. However in the second paragraph the discussion changes completely as I have a different intention in it altogether. A sense of feelings and emotions are attached to it while writing a letter to my home.
Each of the paragraphs has a different approach in its own way. In the first paragraph, my intention is to sell the place so I promote the place in my own way. But, when it comes to knowing a place or describing a place, I would say the first paragraph is more appropriate because it gives us all the information that is important to understand the place.
Everyone has emotions in their own home and everyone will feel about it in the same way but the physical description of a place will differ always. So, according to me, the first paragraph is clearer about describing the place as it is.
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