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Required Audience Profile Required Audience Profile This audience profile is required as part of the week one assignment. Is my primary audience external or internal?The primary audience is internal because he/she is an upper level manager in the same organization.1. What are some key demographics about my audience, such as age, gender, family situation, etc.?The audience is of the masculine gender, because one of the assistants is of feminine gender. This is because of a third gender rule, of medium age due to Nina Hernandez representing the old while Jeff represents the young, a married man probably with kids.2. How much does my audience know about the topic?
The audience seems to be very knowledgeable in such like matters due to the expertise in thinking (Guffey, 2012). 3. How much formality does my audience prefer?Prefers formal or official way of handling such an issue.4. How do I expect my audience to react to this message?Expect them to refuse granting the permission due being allowed the earlier one.5. What are my audience’s values in relation to this message? What do they care about most?The audience is disciplined, decisive and formal in the operation.
They care most about their job security.6. What do I want my audience to think, do, feel, or believe after reading my message?Sympathize with me and eventually grant me the chance.7. Are there any benefits for my audience that is related to this message?Yes, if they refuse then Jeff will attend to the visitor but if he refuses customers may be lost (Guffey, 2012). 8. What information do I need to include for the secondary audience?Jeff Name, past absent dates, basic salary.9. Which medium is most appropriate for this message and this audience? Why?Electronic.
This is because it is easier to prepare and if need be can be converted to print anytime the need arises.Electronic Medium.FYN HOTELFrom: davidnewman@fynhotel.comTo: jeffclarke@fynhotel.comSubject: Emergency LeaveCc:md@fynhotel.comFollowing the message I received today about your intended emergency leave for the upcoming holiday, I regret to inform you that it was not successful. This is due to various reasons as explained below:Ms. Nina Hernandez, who has been covering for you during the last three times you were away in two months, shall be away during the weekend celebrating her grandson’s first birthday.
She won’t therefore be able to cover for you.There is going to be a conference of electrical engineers in our neighborhood and they have requested to stay at our hotel. Your presence will matter during this time because of our projected profit from the conference.As you already know, we have limited staff and therefore we can’t run well with you and Ms. Hernandez away. You need to be there to avoid short staffing.There is no intention of firing you but just to make it clear that it will be difficult running this weekend without you.
We therefore require your services so much this weekend.Yours,David NewmanFinance officer. (Mary Ellen Guffey, 2012)BibliographyMary Ellen Guffey, D. L. (2012). Essentials of Business Communication. Cengage Learning.
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